Chapter 1 - Page 21

March 14th, 2018, 9:00 am
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March 10th, 2018, 9:24 pm
Things are starting to get real foggy here! (also Raine's eyes look more normal, she might be snapping back to her usual self!)

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March 14th, 2018, 11:13 am
Too bad he’s not a fourth-wall breaker, or else he could have said, “Nice going, ‘monochrome-boy.’”

Also, I’d like to point out a grammar error in this page. “You COULD CAN buy those.” Which one is the intended word?
March 14th, 2018, 11:31 am
@LightBlueBlaze: Haha XD

Fixed, thanks for the spot! I was jumping between two similar phrases and my brain turned to mush and combined them incorrectly...oops!
March 14th, 2018, 11:42 am
@Pokemontrainergigi: Not a problem! Hey, I’ve bet a lot of people have done that before- I certainly have! Sometimes your brain can’t juggle multiple similar phrases, and the sentence comes out wrong. Could or can, that is the ultimate question! XD
March 14th, 2018, 2:25 pm
@Pokemontrainergigi: I think that is extremely common. I often find myself fusing sentences or typing a word twice like: "honestly I love nothing more than red panda honestly" instead of just deciding where exactly I want the word.