Prologue 9

November 17th, 2016, 11:00 am
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Pokemontrainergigi
November 17th, 2016, 12:37 am
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Prologue 0-9 Final prologue page!

Our main character's names will be revealed in the first chapter, and as well as that you guys will get to input commands on their actions when that begins ;D

Besides our main characters being introduced, our Umbreon savoir here will be named in the first chapter too, but I should note he was inspired by AzpbEagleHunter and an anonymous user's submissions!
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PJSam
November 17th, 2016, 11:06 am
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Where did he get that cloth sledge thing he's using to drag the lady Pansear on?
Malc Modnar
November 17th, 2016, 5:17 pm
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@PJSam: It's best not to ask these questions.

Never mind the fact that the umbreon is dragging it from behind.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:40 am
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@Malc Modnar: How else would he drag it though? If he dragged it in front of him he'd be stepping on our Pansear! XD
Rune Knight
November 17th, 2016, 6:31 pm
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@PJSam:
It could be a cloak.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:39 am
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@PJSam: Magic! Or hidden in the inky blackness of last page. ;D
Charvi
November 17th, 2016, 11:50 am
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The umbreons so Fluffeh! *Throws hearts everywhere*
AzpbEagleHunter
November 17th, 2016, 12:02 pm
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Yes! *fist pump*
AzpbEagleHunter
November 17th, 2016, 12:10 pm
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@Pokemontrainergigi: This morning has been kinda crappy but you have made my day so much better. Thank you and keep up the good work!

P.S. He looks exactly as I pictured him (can't tell you how excited I am :D)
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:41 am
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@AzpbEagleHunter: Well I'm glad I made your day! :D You're welcome!
SilverSpirits
November 17th, 2016, 2:00 pm
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That Umbreon seemes to have had some rough times. Also, I love the radiating blue light from his rings.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:41 am
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@SilverSpirits: Mhmm, and thank you!
Rune Knight
November 17th, 2016, 6:36 pm
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That's a very nice umbreon though. Really like the... everything.

I might be a little biased.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:41 am
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@Rune Knight: Seeing the amount of Eevee evolution submissions I get, I think everyone is a little biased XD
Guest
November 18th, 2016, 2:08 pm
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I would like to see the ones the umbreon was based on.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:48 am
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@Guest: I won't be posting the submissions, sorry! Main reason being, some submissions have "hidden" information, like someone who pretending to be one thing or someone who has a major secret. Not saying this one does, but if I post some and not others...it might be assumed the ones I don't post have a secret XD
Rune Knight
November 19th, 2016, 10:19 pm
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@Pokemontrainergigi:
In that case, I propose that this is actually a Mimikyu with artistic talent.
Guest
November 22nd, 2016, 7:59 am
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@Pokemontrainergigi: Ok, it just remind me of one i submitted, that was all.
LittleMoons
November 18th, 2016, 6:39 pm
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That Umbreon's seen some hard fights! I mean, a bit mark THAT BIG in your ear... not to mention all those scratches.
Pokemontrainergigi
November 19th, 2016, 11:48 am
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@LittleMoons: Yeah! Poor guy!
Cerulean (Guest)
November 21st, 2016, 12:50 am
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Oh dear. That Umbreon seems to have been in many fights, I wouldn't be surprised if he/she was feeling blue. Though all of those rough past battles may have given them a dark and chilly personality... Not funny? Okay then...

All puns aside, I can't wait for the first chapter to begin! Let's pray that we all don't manage to kill them within the first five pages.
Guest
November 27th, 2016, 6:02 pm
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How would I submit fan-art?
Pokemontrainergigi
November 27th, 2016, 6:44 pm
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@Guest: If you have a Smackjeeves account, you can send me a private message here! Otherwise, you can feel free to just reply here with a link to it!
WinkyGoMoo
December 3rd, 2016, 8:27 pm
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(Super late comment here whoops)

I really like how you handled this prologue. The way you blended the establishment of setting and scenario was neat, and it was the perfect length. And of course, the art is top notch.

Super excited for Chapter 1! :)
bluefiredragon
December 4th, 2016, 9:49 pm
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-insert "SHINY UMBREON IS TOO OVERUSED" joke here-
Rune Knight
December 19th, 2016, 2:34 am
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So no one's thrown a command out there yet? In that case, let's go with the classic.

Make a perception check to try to find the plot.
Guest
December 19th, 2016, 10:42 am
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@Rune Knight: Roles a d20, 11!
Pokemontrainergigi
December 19th, 2016, 3:55 pm
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@Rune Knight: Well lucky for you the DC was low and the cover page is going up tomorrow ;D
Pure umbreon
January 13th, 2017, 4:40 am
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I love how you did the shiny umbreon. Mew mew
Ginger (Guest)
April 19th, 2017, 9:15 am
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to quote the protagonist of another incredible RPG The future is ours to decide!
GearTech147
May 22nd, 2019, 5:56 pm
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tbh it kinda looked like the Umbreon was blushing to me at first. =P